Monday, August 26, 2013

Writing sample

Writing Sample


Revealing overcrowding and preventable accidents

Statistics clearly state that preventable accidents occur every day in the United States leading to deaths and trips to the emergency room.  Overcrowding in emergency rooms all over the country leads to thousands of deaths each year that could be prevented.  According to the national association of doctors, over 1000 people die each year due to preventable accidents, and overcrowding in emergency rooms. Over 800 million dollars is spent each year on accidents that should have never happened in the first place.
The National Association of Trauma Specialists (NATS) is now issuing first aid books to help educate people on how to treat accidents and offer preventative measures on how to stop them from happening in the first place. Pinpointing common trending preventable accidents will help reduce the amount of accidents year to year, as well as reducing overcrowding in emergency rooms. This booklet will help save lives each year cause by accidents by educating people.
However, everyone should be aware of the risks that they face if they do not educate themselves on preventable accidents. What are preventable accidents, and how can you limit your own personal risk of these accidents.

What is a preventable accident?
A preventable accident is an accident that with the right awareness and education could be easily avoided. Preventable accidents are a leading cause of overcrowding in emergency rooms in the United States.
Preventable accidents include people in automobile accidents who do not where there seat belt  people who do not where helmets in activities that require helmets (skiing, snowboarding, biking, etc.), people not reading the manuals on household appliances and are unaware of how dangerous they can be, etc.  Basically, a preventable accident is any accident that should not occur and can easily be avoided.
Preventable accidents overcrowd emergency rooms and increase the risk of deaths in emergency rooms as a result. Americans on average are at a higher risk of preventable accidents by 200% than they are of having a heart attack.